Sean曰:天下考试本一家,托福之矛可破雅思之盾。
Sean何出此言呢?
In the past, people store knowledge in the books. Nowadays people store knowledge on the internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
看到这个题目,Sean老师发现此话题和托福综合写作tpo6的主题极其相似。托福综合写作reading的文章就是极好的议论文范文。那么我们就一起来学习一下正真的English native speakers是如何来写议论文的。
开头-立论1-立论2-驳论-结尾
tpo6 阅读的文章讲的是关于communal online encyclopedia(在线公共百科全书)的缺陷,下面我们就来看此文的两个立论段,并自己模仿。
| 立论1 |
论点:communal online encyclopedia缺乏可信度
结果:提供信息有误不准确
对比:traditional encyclopedia, 由专家编写,符合学术标准
论点:Contributors to the knowledge on the internet often lack academic credentials.
解释:Without strict inspection system, anybody on the information highway could pubilsh his or her ideas easily,
结果:thereby making these “contributions” partially informed at best and downright inaccurate in many cases.
对比:In contrast, books are written by experts who adhere to certain standards that non-specialists cannot achieve.
| 立论2 |
论点:online encyclopedia信息容易被篡改
结果:使用者无法识别
对比:traditional encyclopedia,不会发生
论点:Even if the information on the internet is correct, they are vulnerable to illegal modification.
解释:The communal nature of online knowledge gives unscrupulous users and vandals or hackers the opportunity to fabricate, delete and corrurt information online.
结果:Once the changes have been made on the original text, an unsuspecting user cannot tell the information has been tampered with.
终结果:This may have adverse impact when people are doing research with the help of reference on the internet.
阅读是最好的写作老师,同学们在学习范文时,千万不能当看小说一样,一定要“读三遍”:
第一遍:理解大意
第二遍:分析文章结构,逻辑过程
第三遍:积累摘抄好词好句
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