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2017年3月25日雅思写作考情分析

本期考题T1T2都比较常规。小作文是一道动态(点动)图,大作文是教育类的观点类(AD)题目。上过Sean老师课程的同学应该非常清晰得知道它们的写作思路和技巧,再加上自己场景词汇和小作文高频词句的积累,应对这两题是小case

Task1

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I.改写题干

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of dependent individuals (people aged below 15 and above 65) in five Asian countries and the global average figure in 2000 and the prediction in 2050.

II.平均单写,其余按升降分类,并写出特征,注意时态变化(2000-2050)

world average 40%50%

升:China 35%45%幅度小

Korea 30%60%Japan 40%55%幅度大

降:India 50%35%

平:Indonesia 35%

As can be seen from the chart, averagely, the percentage of world’s dependent people was 40% in 2000 and it is predicted to rise to 50% in 2050.

In China, its number experienced and is projected to have a moderated increase from 35% to 45% during the half century. The percentage of Korea and Japan were only 30% and 40% in the year of 2000 and they are both forecasted to grow markedly to 60% and 55%, respectively.

In contrast, in 2000, half of India’s population were dependent people, but in 2050, its proportion will plummet to only 35%.

It is notable that in Indonesia, its number stabilized and is about to level off at around 35%

III.总结:与平均值对比

Overall, in 2000, the percentage of India’s dependent people were higher than the world’s average number. But in 2050, it is Korea’s and Japan’s figures that will outnumber the average.

 

Task 2

In the past, the role of teacher was to provide information. today, students have access to wide sources of information. There is, therefore, no role of teacher in modern education. Do you agree or disagree?

本题中含有绝对词:no.此类题型在今年121日的考试中也出现了。

观点:disagree

 

结构及参考思路:

I.开头:背景-转述-自己观点

II.立论1:老师可以承担学生的咨询师(counsel):学习规划/职业选择/心理辅导

III.立论2: 老师可以帮学生形成道德和法律意识(awareness of law and morality

IV.驳论:网络可以提供学生几乎所有知识和信息

        但是,学生缺乏甄别信息的能力

 

立论段参考例文:

让步:Teachers, who used to just be regarded as the delivery vehicle of knowledge, have long been underestimated by many people with conservative attitude towards schooling.

论点:However, in this modern society, a qualified teacher could also act as a counsel for their students.

解释:Equipped with pedagogical methodology and knowledge about psychology, teachers are able to provide students with profession advice about their study plan, career choice and mental fitness.

结果:Thus, they are more likely to know how to achieve their goals step by step, play an appropriate and valuable role in a group and adjust themselves to overcome the stumbling blocks in their lives.


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