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本期考试小作文是一道综合图(含有两张图表),这类题目可以将两张图表分开,各写一段,但要注意和动静图的区别(参见2.16考情分析)。

本期大作文是一道常见的观点类(AD类)考题,是一道老题,并且还是是上课时例题的原题!


       

Task 1


(以上数据仅供参考)

I.改写题干

The two bar chart illustrate how much money of commoditiesAustralia imported from and exported to China from 1998 to 2004 and what kindsof goods it imported from China between 2003 and 2004.

II.1:线动图

先说总体趋势

As can be seen from the first chart, the values of both exported andimported goodswitnessed increasing trends,with the latter rising at a much rapider rate.

再说具体变化

During the six years, the revenue from exportgrewgradually from about 500 billion dollars to just under 1000 billiondollars. And theexpenditure of importrose slightly from700 billion to 900 billion in 2000, before soaring to almost3000 billion in 2004.

III. 点动图

按升降分类,抓住主要特征

升:toys/ sports equipment,telecommunication equipment(变化大)

computers, furniture(变化小)

平:clothes

It is noticeable from the second chart that thespending of almost all the types of imported goods listed experienced growth to varying degrees except clotheswhose figures maintained the same at 4 billion dollars in both years.

The money usedto importtoys/ sports equipment and telecommunication equipment almosttripled and thatspent on computers and furniture both went up moderatelyfrom 5 to 6 billion.

IV.总结(两幅图表都要总结到)

Overall, Australia tended to rely more on importinggoods from China and China-made toys/ sports equipment and telecommunicationequipment gained in more popularity than the other products.

Task 1


   

Some people think children can learn effectively bywatching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and atschool. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

结构:开头-立论1-立论2-驳论-结尾

思路拓展:

正方:

1. 拓展知识(enlarge the scope of knowledge

2. 高效学习,电视节目更有趣(high-efficiency, stimulating

反方:

1. 身心健康(physical and psychological fitness

2. 学习成绩(poor grades

3.*与父母的关系(emotional tie

驳论段例文:

观点:disagree

反方论点:

We cannot ruleout the fact that children mayenlarge their scope of knowledge by watching some educationalprogrammes like Discovery.

解释:

Being exposed to these TV praogrammes, children tend to have moreenthusiasm to learn the knowledge about nature, history and culture.

结果:

As a result, the extra-curricularknowledge from television viewing may afford them an advantage to out-standtheir peers in various kinds of competitions about different subjectsthey would face at school.

反驳:

However, the benefit to children is quite limited, asmuch more knowledge could be acquired from extensivereading after school.


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