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2017年2月18日雅思写作考情分析

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雅思写作考情分析


Task 1



改写


The two maps describe the present plane structure of a conference centre and its rebuilding plan.


原始图:按方向写出有什么(注意介词的使用和句型的多样)


At present, on the northwestern corner of the centre are two meeting rooms, to the east of which was located a hall. There are a row of departments, including a toilet, a reception and a café,to the south of the meeeting rooms and the hall and beside a main road. In the eastern part of the area, a garden has been provided for people to relax, with a circular car park, which is linked to the road by a passageway,to its south.


变化图:按原方向,写出变化(注意时态和变化表达的多样)


In the future, the hall is planned to be downsized, with a newly-built café and kitchen on the north.

The department units, where the reception and café is to be replaced by a reference room and a fitness centre, will also be redesigned. In the east, the garden is projected to be enlarged. And the car park will be reshaped into a squire one with two tracks (entrance and exit) leading to the road.


总结:地貌变化结果


Overall, after the reconstruction, the conference centre will be more multi-functional and user-friendly.



Task 2


Some people think technology makes life complex, so we should make life simpler without using technology. Agree or disagree?


审题:

观点类(AD), 不能光谈technology 的好坏,要抓住关键词life complex or simpler展开讨论


观点选择:

disagree


核心段思路:

立论1: 科技对于人们Work/Study 的好处:提高efficiency


立论2: 科技对于人们Entertainment的好处:提供convenience


驳论:

让步-The elderly: difficulty,


refute-solution:clear instruction, simplify the usage


立论1段例文:

To begin with, the advance of technology has greatly enhanced work and study efficiency in people’s daily lives.

The invention of assembly line in automobile industry sets free millions of labour workers from the arduous and repetitive work; the widespread use of video conference in many International corporations makes team work among different branches easy and convenient, and the popularity of tele-education helps students get easier access to various kinds of knowledge.

Compared with the old days when manufacture is largely depended on manual work, business trip is the only way to conduct overseas business and traditional schooling is the irreplaceable approach to impart knowledge, technology does help people in all walks of life better adapt to the fast-paced society.


assembly line流水线

sets free sb. from…将。。。从。。。中释放

arduous and repetitive work艰苦重复的劳动

video conference视频会议

branches分公司

tele-education远程教育

manual work手工工作

irreplaceable approach无法替代的方式

impart knowledge传授知识

people in all walks of life各行各业的人


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