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雅思写作考情分析



本期鬼畜考题:探索外星生命



Some people want government to spend money on looking for life on other planets, however, others think it is a waste of public money when the earth has so many problems.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

本期大作文考了一道非常少见的题:政府投资外星探索。很多同学由于缺乏相关的背景知识或词伙表达而感到无从下手。




结构:


开头段

一方观点段

另一方观点段

自己观点段


一方观点段:探索地外生命


1. “倒逼”科技发展:航空航天技术(aeronautic and astronautic technology),远程通讯(telecommunication), 电子技术(electronic technology)


2. 经济利益:太空资源,新能源(new energy, alternatives)


例文:


分论点1

One the one hand, the research on extraterrestrial life could force people to advance the technology related to this field, such as aeronautic and astronautic technology, telecommunication technology and electronic technology.


举例:

It could be best illustrated by the example of the US government who invested huge sum of money on space research from 1960s to 1980s. With the rocket energy technology accumulated in this period, American is still the leader in manufacturing large civilian airbuses.


分论点2

Besides, the possible economic profits cannot be neglected.


解释:

Human is now living in an era of energy consumption, where all kinds of resources, including fuel source, water, arable land and so on, are in the danger of exhaustion.


结果:

The exploration on outer-space creature may help us find new energy and unknown alternatives to address the increasingly aggravated energy crisis.



另一方观点段:1.浪费钱,2.地球有很多问题要解决


1.科研投入(financial and human resource),风险巨大(high risk)


2.environmental problem, poverty, medical treatment…


例文


分论点1

On the other hand, the financial and human resource invested in alien civilization is unbearable to some countries, and it exists high risks in this kind of scientific research.


举例:

Even the powerful former Soviet Union, who was a pioneer in this field, was encumbered by his ambition to conquer the out space, which has been proved to be one of the main culprits for its bankruptcy.


分论点2

Moreover, Budgets allocated in this field can better spent on other aspects which are more relevant to human welfare, ranging from solving environmental problems, alleviating global poverty, and improving medical insurance systems.


结果:

Thus, the majority of people could leave a life of subsistence for one of relative comfort and prosperity. (生活不止与苟且,更有舒适和繁荣)



自己观点段:折中观点


基于国家不同情况(developed, developing or underdeveloped)分类讨论

For my part, after considering the arguments above, I think an essential consideration is the overall strength of a nation.


For those highly-developed countries where the majority of people enjoyed a high level of living standard, they are justified in their attempts to explore the life on other planets.


And for those developing countries, it is a better idea for them to join in the out-space scientific research led by more powerful governments, through which they can also enjoy the benefits with less investment.


However, it is tackling the domestic problems, especially those closely related to people’s living and surviving, that really needs the top concern from the governments of under-developed countries.



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